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Falling slowly by =Alamic05:iconAlamic05:

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Falling slowly, eyes that know me
And I can't go back
Moods that take me and erase me
And I'm painted black
You have suffered enough
And warred with yourself
It's time that you won


Falling slowly
Model : Claudia a.k.a :iconoxygeneeffect:


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*Amoretti-Amaranthine Sep 20, 2009, 7:41:55 AM
The beige and blue-green works very well here together. I like how the blue is somewhat reflected in the model's hair towards the top. It really ties the subject and the background together, so to speak. I also like how the model is off to the side and not dead center in the photograph. It creates a mysterious aura, especially with her eye having the bright maroon ring in it.

I would've made the ring in her eye, instead of maroon, a color that is in the background. I think that would've been a better choice because it would've been picked up in her hair as well. Also, I would've liked to see more sharpness in the model's face. I think that would've worked slightly better than a softer glow.

Awesome shot! You executed this idea very well.
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*Judge-Fred Jun 4, 2009, 10:14:36 AM
Absolutely lovely! :nod:
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~OxygeneEffect Jun 4, 2009, 10:18:17 AM
<3

tu chiar le dai pozelor mele mai mult efect si putin mister... chiar imi place.

si din nou... multumesc !!! :D

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Mood: Wow! ~SyllAndy Jun 4, 2009, 10:18:32 AM
her lips... tare mandra :D :clap:
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=Alamic05 Jun 4, 2009, 10:19:28 AM
misterioaso :D :hug:

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=mossawi Jun 5, 2009, 7:36:32 AM
very cool, i wish i hadn't seen the face though, would have made ur other piece that was covered stronger, but its very cool :D :D

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~sylmoon Jun 13, 2009, 4:40:28 AM
aham :D reusita, desi poate ca ar fi mers aici nuanta aceea de topaz a ochilor din cealalta fotografie... oricum, e foarte bun portretul :D

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=Alamic05 Jun 13, 2009, 10:34:19 AM
ma bucur ca iti place:D

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May 17, 2009, 4:09:43 PM

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